Okay so this is just a short story i had to write for my grade 1 drama exam it was ment to be like an advert i past
but my teacher didn't really like the story
so i wanted to see what others think .....
On the 31st October twins were born the a mother that was showing no signs of pregnancy ,but one was born still the other was left alone and somehow survived ,but with the help of some one ,her dead brother .
He may be dead but his spirt has no end and lives on in Purgatory.
He's to good for hell but to bad for heaven but heaven or hell has to take him or they will both colide and end Purgatory ,end the chance for the bad to turn good ,It's up to the living to change the dead
let me know what you think .. xx